PugJesus@piefed.social to 196@lemmy.worldEnglish · 5 days agoThe rules of the Loraxmedia.piefed.socialimagemessage-square6fedilinkarrow-up1100arrow-down13
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minus-squareA_norny_mousse@feddit.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up5·5 days agoThe rhythm would have been perfect if whoever made this had just dropped the “f*cking” 😕
minus-square🇰 🌀 🇱 🇦 🇳 🇦 🇰 🇮 @pawb.sociallinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·5 days agoJust say fucking instead of fuasteriskscking.
minus-squareA_norny_mousse@feddit.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up2·5 days agoOf course I replaced it with a u in my mind. But that’s not what I meant, I meant the rhythm of the poem.
minus-squareStovetop@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·edit-218 hours agoYou’re 100% right. Without the “fucking”, each line is 5 syllables. Otherwise it’s 5/5/5/7.
The rhythm would have been perfect if whoever made this had just dropped the “f*cking” 😕
Just say fucking instead of fuasteriskscking.
Of course I replaced it with a u in my mind. But that’s not what I meant, I meant the rhythm of the poem.
You’re 100% right. Without the “fucking”, each line is 5 syllables. Otherwise it’s 5/5/5/7.